Hopefully an honest and fair analysis of the advert... (and remember it's only my opinion :twirly
Opening
So we see the 'caricature' Alton Towers with a BLUE SKY, everything looking very pleasant. Then a crow holding a swirly lollypop enters and drops down which reveals the smiler. This feels like a nice transition to 'happy place' to 'sinister place'. The crow or raven are recognised as evil omens and predict the sinister happenings of the next part...
Join us...
So we then see a crazed dude sat in The Smiler with normal visitors getting on. This communicates a difference between the two people, those who are marmalised and those who are not. The 'normal' visitor looks at him cautiously after the marmalised guy says 'join us'. This further asserts an evil or sinister theme. The ride proceeds to 'launch' down a spirally tunnel, a close up on the riders eye communicates that a hypnotic effect is occurring. This part of the advert gives me hope that there may be more lights/effects added to the tunnel.
The Track
This for me is the biggest problem of the whole advert. We see the train propelling around the track and inversions, switching between POV and other cameras. But what about the surroundings? Beautiful blue sky and green... certainly not sinister or evil. It could be said that it's beautiful because the riders are marmalised, but see there is no difference to the surroundings here than in the beginning of the advert. Maybe a dark/grey surrounding (much like x-sector is) turning insanely colourful and trippy when the rider is marmalised could have worked better. The advert continues showing the insanity of the track well and proceeds to show two encounters with the marmaliser.
The Marmaliser
The first encounter is with the 'Giggler' leg of the marmaliser. The advert depicts the rider inhaling the gas which makes his eyes spiral. He then passes the marmaliser screen, watching himself as he goes by in a weird, transe-like manner. The 'big brother' and 'Orwellian' feel is communicated well here.
One of us...
The final sequence depicts the once separate riders grinning as one. The normal visitor has made the transition and is now 'one of us' or marmalised. The original sinister guy says 'you belong to The Smiler'. The camera then makes a close up on the swirling eyes which then morph into The Smiler logo.
On the whole I think the advert is good and would communicate well to the general public. However my geekdom is upset by the lack of detail and the excessive embellishment of the rides features. I'm all for embellishment, but this does push the limits. In my opinion I believe a lay audience would also think it was launched, or in their words 'like Rita'.
Certainly not a classic like Nemesis, Oblivion or Air, but nowhere near as dire at Rita's. I'd say it falls in-between these two points.
auntiiimartiii said:
WHY ARE YOU PEOPLE NEVER HAPPY.
The advert wasn't made for enthusiasts. It's for the GP. You only need to look on the comments on the ad on Alton Tower's Facebook page to see it has gone down brilliantly.
All we can do is give our opinions, we are not the general public, we are AT geeks. We will never be happy, never satisfied... And we will always think we could do it better. :twirly: